All 3 movie Reviews

Face Melter Face Melter

Rated 4 / 5 stars

looks sick, i particularly like the yellow guy with the blue face coming out of his nose, interested to see the final product.

Silhouettes in Oslo Silhouettes in Oslo

Rated 2 / 5 stars

It's certainly an ambitious video and you got some stuff right but you also got some stuff not-so right.

For example, some of the effects (ie. slowing down/speeding up) worked out well and I liked the whole concept of the journey getting to the subway.

That being said, there were a few things that didn't look so great. The camera was shaky at a few moments, most noticeably around the 2:50 mark, when you're running, which isn't an easy thing to do with a camera. Usually a camera crew would use some sort of a crane when following a actor who's running but I understand that you're just using the limited means at your disposal. Also the lighting is pretty ugly at times. You can solve this by shooting at day or by getting a couple of lamps to light up the room that you're in.

As I said, it's an ambitious video and it's good that you're even attempting to make one such as this but Newgrounds is a site for animation. There may be a couple videos here and there that break that rule but generally all videos on the site are some sort of cartoon. If it's not already, then I suggest you upload it to sites like Youtube or Vimeo and see how you do there.

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Rawnern responds:

Thank you for the good review :)

I'm All Alone I'm All Alone

Rated 0 / 5 stars

I like the song however it's not really an animation, it's just a still image with the lyrics on screen. I'd recommend posting the song in the Audio portal if you want people to listen to it.

sblofficial responds:

thanks for the suggestion. please look for the next video, that should be arriving soon...the title is Elmendorf